Amazing. Truly Amazing. You wrote everything perfectly.
One of the lines that I loved the best was Pain ripped through her body a second time as silver light flowed down her skin, smothering the yoki within. As her breath slowed, she could almost hear Teresa’s silent laughter and the gentle touch of her hand on her head.
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Date: 2007-06-24 06:56 am (UTC)One of the lines that I loved the best was Pain ripped through her body a second time as silver light flowed down her skin, smothering the yoki within. As her breath slowed, she could almost hear Teresa’s silent laughter and the gentle touch of her hand on her head.
For a moment, Clare felt peace.
Wonderful job!