Parsnip's Fic Journal

Gorgeous! A little abstract, but I like that. You've captured Nanao's character well; I like the way you've portrayed a softer, more vulnerable side that she keeps hidden away and you've also touched upon the motivation she has for doing what she does. Many people note the fact that she is very driven in her work, but few focus on what actually drives her. A few typos, but in general nicely phrased and well written.