http://tsukihime-san.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] tsukihime-san.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] snippets 2009-06-12 04:50 am (UTC)

yes, I do like it better this way. And not only because you've added interaction between them (*Aww*), but also because it is flowing better and has the same sort of voice throughout the whole piece <3
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