ext_124416 ([identity profile] pixisity.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] snippets 2007-06-05 07:53 pm (UTC)

He liked to think he'd never change, but if he were to turn out to be a quarter at ease as Yu now appeared to be.

There appears to be something missing from the end of this; the thought is not quite complete?

peaked -> peeked

lied -> lay/laid

Other than those things (sorry for being nitpicky), this story is utter brilliance and I'm looking forward to reading more! Thanks Lena for reccing the story and thanks Parsnip-chan for writing it. <3



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