I love it. You have a beautiful writing style, and in addition to that you got the character very close to the manga...I feel depressed now. I felt depressed about FMA ever since chapter 62. Hawkeye is one of the best characters, but I find her the most realistic and therefore the more tragic one. Couldn't Arakawa make her happy? That might explain the number of Royai fanfic. Sometimes, it's good to have a harsh/realistic one about her too...