Oh; this is so sweet and hopeful. I just love it. This particular series of sentences was excellent:
Would she be able to see the purple strength of Miroku’s eyes spreading across the dusk, and the silver lining of the setting sun as Inuyasha journeyed wherever his heart led him? Would she be able to say goodbye to the sapphire skies of Kagome’s cheery smile when she returned to the era that birthed her? Would the flaming red of the rising sun continue to greet her day after day as Shippou aged and matured and grew into the wisest demon of them all?
I hate doing that (copying the whole thing), but I haven't quite got a handle on an alternative. I also thought 'pursuit of nonchalance' was outstanding. Your story captures the essence I prefer to think flavours the Sango/Miroku pairing.
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Would she be able to see the purple strength of Miroku’s eyes spreading across the dusk, and the silver lining of the setting sun as Inuyasha journeyed wherever his heart led him? Would she be able to say goodbye to the sapphire skies of Kagome’s cheery smile when she returned to the era that birthed her? Would the flaming red of the rising sun continue to greet her day after day as Shippou aged and matured and grew into the wisest demon of them all?
I hate doing that (copying the whole thing), but I haven't quite got a handle on an alternative. I also thought 'pursuit of nonchalance' was outstanding. Your story captures the essence I prefer to think flavours the Sango/Miroku pairing.